If you were a college writing teacher what grade would you give this poem? (it's long but well worth it)?

Oh, this was amazing! I love this type of poems and stories. You should make it longer, finish the story a bit more dramatically. Something that leaves you thinking about the poem long after you've read it, something that gives you the chills at night even though its just a poem. Great work, if I were your teacher, I'd give you 100 or A+. Hope you keep writing.